In today's lesson we presented Will Craigs film pitch. We decided to present Will's as it was the film pitch we felt most confident with. The feedback we got was to make sure our film is realistic as originally our film opening was going to be some form natural disaster and how it changed one man's life. However we decided to go against this idea as we got told it would be too hard to film. Another bit of feedback we got was to make sure our narrative was sorted as it was quite hard to follow as we didn't have a solid storyline. However the bit we did well was deciding our target audience as we explained why we chose the audience well and in good amount of detail.